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When do you think you will be done, it's very good I just can't wait for it to be completed!!!
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Keep writing! :) I love it so far! Keep up the good work!
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From chapter 1 onwards, I liked it. The story is intriguing and I would like to see how it ends for her/them.
As for the prologue, I would drop it. You use the first part to describe the girl and you can easily do that in the story. The second part where she meets Sol can be left in the prologue, but that too can be incorporated in the story. Which it has.
Keep on writing.
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Sian xox
thanks
W...WHAT!? you can't leave it there! haha, its good and I can't wait to meet Liam ;)
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awh thanks :)