I really like it but serciously change the age group. sixteen and up or have it on adult context.
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Great book!!!! BTW I. LOVE BOTDF (sort for blood on the floor) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-D
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The story is great but still a lot of errors. I'm not sure if it is worth cleaning up. It's not a unique story, is it? You have a fresh perspective that shines through. That's primarily why I read it all. If you can do a complete edit of spelling, grammar, etc and retain the POV you might find stuff to add to it and it could be worth it. Just my humble opinion. ;)
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yeah I just realized how horrible the story was! LOL! I actually was thinking of editing it! TTYL xox)
Omg wow I really love most of your books how do you keep up with all of them? Every time I do a book I like, the next day a new one pops in my head xDD and then I'm like ah.. what about the last one..
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Well you can expect my first book to be kind of sloppy can't you?I mean c'mon,but I understand we're u are coming from! My other books are way better.:)
ok whos Ben?? i tought his name was DRAKE??!!?? WTF
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It was okay, but there are some obvious mistakes like people stated, you should describe the characters, it makes people use there imaginations more
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Keep it up and the font is too big, making me so confuse in all its really good.
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this story is so confusing but cool i mean how can a girl go to her first day at a new school and is already by a boy house making out, it's so weird
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! SORRY stupid careless mistake I mean blood on the DANCE floor!!
Me too!:)
Jay has so much fun he laughs like a girl :-D he is really cute :-) :-)