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i've started to like poetry we began to learn it in school then i remember you wrote poetry and i read it and it is AMAZING, I LOVE IT^_^

I read them all. Took 1 hour. Try not to cry so much. Add some smiles.
Great work though.
I enjoyed reading.

I have read your book of poetry, but I'm sorry to say, it needs work. You have some good poems in there, but there is one called, Dying Slow? It seems to be repeating itself through the rest of the book. I may want to fix that. All in all though, Good Work!. :)

all of these poems were very touching, and funny. I would have to say my favorite one is, I Guess I was just having a...... Moment? Much fun to read. Most certainly made my day.

I'll read the rest later, but so far I've gotten up to page 38 and I've gotta say that I LIKE YOU! :) You're are a really really good writer and you're are so truthful! I love these poems and I really like the one called "Being Me". Anyways, keep writing because you have a something special (talent :) ) and it's really good. HAPPY WRITING!!!!!:)

Your poetry is so awesome! Sometimes I expect it to end one way and it ends another.

I wish I could give it another heart.

<3 it's not official but...

This was truly amazing so thoughtful so beautiful you my dear has talent to show the world with

I don't see why you described the first few pages as stupid, they were heartfelt and I enjoyed the humor in them. As for the part the "Cliche love" part, it was endearing, there's nothing wrong with a little bit of romance in poetry from time to time :)
Though the majority of your poetry is free verse, which gives you room for a lot of freedom in terms of words and sentence structure, and I rather enjoy how you decided to phrase a lot of the poems. I would have liked a few separate titles for each of the poems, but even without the titles, I found the majority of the poems amusing. Especially the one about roses and violets. It's good to know that I'm not the only one who wonders why the original is so authoritarian when stating the colors of the flower.
Overall, a great first book here on BookRix and hopefully, there are more poems to come.
-Angely

It made me stop and think. Laugh and pound the bed.

This is one of the best things I've ever read! I hope you keep writing in it and I hope you never take it down.