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That cracked me up. Remind me to avoid those clever genies next time.

Good one.

~Prakash

Too funny! That ending was hysterical! Loved it.

The points you raised are valid and I will make due corrections.
Thankyou for taking time to detail them.

I am new to writing this being my first story and I hope to write more.

As for the Us Flag question
It goes with the Us flag background and avatar :p
I do have family in America who live in Chicago

Glad it entertained you.:)

My favourite kind of story writing with a great double twist. Well done.

Carol x

glad you liked it. I hope to write some more shorts soon.

Thanks mark for the feedback.
I wanted a double twist and I am happy you enjoyed it.

Neatly packaged and thought out as it draws ideas from several genres and then invents a new one of its own.
Funny stuff, and i recomend that anyone who likes something a bit different, with a sense of humour give this a read.
Well done,
Kade. :)