thats great

Great story and you got my happy vote!

This story told in Diary format is excellent! The suffering of her family; the strange visitations; the discovery of her sister's diary...all of it lent well to a great read. Well done, and my vote.

Well written Melissa and a good read. My only critique would be that I knew who the killer was from almost the beginning. Wish it could have been someone else....apart from that, you did a great job.

for a murder mystery. You've got my vote, and even if you are late in the contest, congratulations on a well done job.

As great as always Mel...voted with zeal.