Wayne..and others who may wonder. NO, I have never been the other woman. I have never had an affair with a married man. These poems are just poems with nothing relating to my own life. I have a wonderful, caring father... and am in a very good relationship. Just snippets of stuff from other people are in these poems.
Wow. I loved it. Most people would jsut shun the other woman but these make you think about it from her POV. Good work :D
This is certainly different from all the other submissions for the poetry contest and deserves my vote.
vALERIE, PLEASE TELL vANESSA that her poems are good if a trifle sad. Enjpyed reading them
Bluedragon
It sucks being the other woman or man. Being the one to turn and run to only when things are thick.
I love the way you bear her pain.
'The Other Woman ' brings out the
real feelings and the predicament so beautifully and aptly expressed.It reminds of Shelley-'our sweetest songs are those that tell of sadest thoughts'. Congratulations.
Very moving, very poignant. I hope to read more of your poetry.
Clean, crisp rhyme and rhythm. Succinct and to the point with great poignancy. Great job. Voted Robynn
My daughter has done a great job...even more so since this is not true...I guarantee it!!