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mitchellfriedman

I just read your BRAINLESS. As I said in my comments of the book, it is an engaging and entertaining blend of two of my favorite genres: Science Fiction and Mystery/Detective Fiction. Thank you for a most enjoyable read.

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Masmadune

*Spoilers for those that haven't read the book.*

I just enjoyed reading Seduction. It was a great story and very aptly titled! Put me in mind of Bentley Little's 'Dominion'. Both stories touch on evil hidden behind the mask of innocence and sexual need. Very erotic and all the more twisted because it calls out to the dark, primal, and forbidden desires that can eat away at a person's soul. My only criticism is that... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

90% of people marry there 7th grade love. since u have read this, u will be told good news 2night. if u don't pass this on nine comments ur worst week starts now this isn't fake. apparently if u copy and paste this on ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. you will either get kissed or asked out in the next 53 minutes someone will say i love u in a new post...

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Gelöschter User

90% of people marry there 7th grade love. since u have read this, u will be told good news 2night. if u don't pass this on nine comments ur worst week starts now this isn't fake. apparently if u copy and paste this on ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. you will either get kissed or asked out in the next 53 minutes someone will say i love u in a new post...

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mitchellfriedman

Just read Seduction. I found it very disturbing. That is to say, as a work of horror, it is quite well done. I just feel the story could have been told as effectively--possibly more effectively--without being so graphic. No, I am not a prude, nor was I offended by the graphic details. I just feel that when you have a strong story--such as the one you have in Seduction--graphic sexuality is not necessary. Otherwise, this was... mehr anzeigen

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thank you for the"um" compliment.

Let me explain why Seduction was so graphic. I was new to the publishing world and wrote a Star Wars story. Being so naive I sent my story to Lucasfims directly. They, of course, sent it back unopened telling me they couldn't open it without a... mehr anzeigen

susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

P.S.
My Star Wars story used to be on Bookrix, but I haven't logged on here in years and unfortunately it was eliminated. It was well liked by many SW fans around the world. One of the "starpilots" who appeared in A New Hope also read it and loved it. He sent me a message telling... mehr anzeigen

mitchellfriedman

I hope nothing I wrote in my comment led you to believe I was suggesting any actual perversion on your part.

In my own writing I tend to avoid explicit sexual scenes. It's a choice I make. In fact, it was a choice I made in college, which led a Professor of Creative Writing to... mehr anzeigen

susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Now that's a true compliment - comparing Seduction to a Stephen novel. Thanks very much for that.
As to the graphic sex, I admit that I went overboard, but it just came out of my head while I wrote this story. I don't follow outlines or take notes, etc., all my ideas come to me... mehr anzeigen

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mitchellfriedman

Just wanted to let you know, I downloaded Seduction. Looking forward to reading it--just don't know when I'll be getting around to it, as I have a rather large pile in the que. Fortunately, though, I am a fast reader. As I said, I'm looking forward to reading the book, particularly because of the one negative review I just read, below.

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mitchellfriedman

I read Time Traveler last night. I couldn't resist offering my thoughts to you. First, I really enjoyed the story. Time Travel is one of my favorite Sci Fi themes. I think you handled it with excellence. I particularly liked the ending. It had a very well crafted bit of irony. This was a very entertaining read that gives much to think about. Thank you for the experience.

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Dua

That's the worst sick novel I have ever read in my life.... Seduction

I wonder how your mind produces such evil stories.

Astaghfirullah its like you are the demon or cult or Satan itself.

Allah save all. Amen

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