wow... dont know what to say
it just baffles my mind how can anyone imagine such vile things.

Good story, well thought out and structured. I notice a few grammar errors but couldn't tell you where they were now I've finished reading. I would also like to say well done for having the guts to write something so provocative and disturbing. I know that there must be many who would be disgusted and shocked that someone could imagine such a story and depict it so graphiically, but I see it as the point of writing, to push the boundaries of imagination and to not fear criticism from the easily offend.

Not a problem. Seduction isn't everyone's "cup of tea." :)

Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm glad you liked my story. :)

Don't let that demon get away get her!!! Please find away to redeem poor Joe!!!! Awesome read was a little off the wall! But scary as hell! Loved it!

The book was alittle lame and the ending was boring.maybe some of your other work is better.sorry just not a fan.

"WOW" That's all I can say......

I understand why you would make such a comment because my book is very disturbing, but you "did" read it which means you aren't above such things. I did mention the fact that this story isn't meant for everyone in the blurb. If you think I'm such a horrible person for writing it, why did you read my story in the first place? No offense meant by that, but you opened yourself up to it. As you can tell by the number of stars my story has received that it's quite popular. Guess that means I'm not really such an evil person for writing it after all because people do seem to like Seduction. :)

All I can ask is...... how could you write this? How could you come up with this story? Yes, I read it. Its like watching a really bloody and gory horror where you can't help but continue to watch even though you don't want to. I just would like to know how you could right it?

omg susanbowes you are a evil genius. this book was very disturbing but so well written. Where can i find more of your work?