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purple79

This was an awesome story line and I never would've expected it to end this way. Great read

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Well thank you very much. I never knew where a storyline goes myself until my fingers hit the keyboard. That's the way I always write my stories. I never write an outline, but just have an idea of what the story is about in most cases; though with Seduction I hadn't a clue what... mehr anzeigen

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chynablack863

page turner thats all i havto saye

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yezall

I enjoyed the easiness of your word flow. I noticed a few spelling error mostly, lord knows my books are probably full of them. I will point them out if you wish.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks yezall. I'd appreciate you'd letting me know the mistakes I made in spelling and any other mistakes you noticed. I'm terrible at grammer too.

theguyfrommo

the book was disturbing but I couldn't stop reading not much sends shivers down my spine but this book did I am an Iraq war vet and have a 4 month old daughter of my own. the book was very good I will not be recommending my wife to read it though she probably wouldn't be able to... mehr anzeigen

susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Well thank you very much. Not only for the great compliment on Seduction, but for serving this country as well. I don't often get to thank a vet and I just wanted to tell you that I really appreciate all you've (and every other vet) has done for me and mine in order to protect us. Bless you!

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ums1973

you call her jessica renee and jessica christine in different places.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for telling me. It was mentioned to me before and I thought I'd corrected the mistake, but apparently it wasn't changed. I'll check it out right away and correct the mistake. :-X

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nibbs013

Great book, really. This was a trip!

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franalisa

I never could have read or watch "Rosemary's baby" nor "The Omen" But, I went through this story keeping to expect a turn for the better ...
which never came :( .
It is well written (in a disturbing way)

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tigger21

All I can say about this book is wow. that lil girl is fucking crazy!! But is was a good book!!

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you liked my story. :-)

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saranya.n

I'm really shocked to read but i can't stop reading.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

It is rather a shocking story, but I have to admit it's a good horror tale. Thanks. :-)

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taistarr

This book is INSANE. I cant even finish reading it.

i am SHOCKED. You have a VIVID imagination.

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taistarr

This book is INSANE. I cant even finish reading it.

i am SHOCKED. You have a VIVID imagination.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the err.... compliment. xD

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