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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks so much for the high praise. I really do wish there was some agency that would publish this novel, but so far - no such luck. It kind of amazes me that publishers still think under age sex and incest are "taboo" subjects. Their major concern is that those under a certain age will read my novel, but even young children can turn the TV on and watch shows about it; so where's the danger in printing up my novel? I've even... mehr anzeigen

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devwij

One of the Best stories Ive ever read. So damn addictive I read it straight thru e night. You gotta get this published or find some way of releasing ur e-book to the world. its too good to just keep for online reading which can be darn slow at times.
Well done! Look forward to another one like it. Keep up e good work n dont water down ur originality to please publishers whims n fancies. There's always a way.

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sarbearr

i will tell you where the mistakes are, they are far and few between though, gives me reasoning to read it again, haha. it was horrible when i was reading it, as soon as i got home i was back on the book. i kept my fiance' very well informed on the book. :)

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

I've been told by others that my story is "addicting." I don't know why that is, but I consider it a great compliment. One person used the term "unputdownable." Cool beanz! What did you fiance say about it; if anything? Just curious. ;-)

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invisablevoice16

Oh my this book is soooo interesting and great. I have been reading for two days now, an di cant stop or look away from the computer when I have too. I have also gotten my friend interested into reading it. She thinks it is great also. I must say this book is messed up though! Might i ask where you got the idea of it? It is amazing. I Love It

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the compliment and I hope your friend reads (and likes) Seduction too. I'm glad you like it. :-)

To be honest the "only" reason I wrote Seduction was because I got the synopsis for my star wars story back. ("Malignant Metamorphosis" which I sent directly to... mehr anzeigen

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sarbearr

i very much enjoyed this. it certainly grabs your attention, you have alot of talent. there were only minor spelling errors, and at one point you used a different middle name, but none the less the story was amazing and very well written.
Congratulations on a job well done.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the great compliment sarbearr. I'm glad you liked my story.

I haven't checked lately so I don't know where the mistakes are. I hate editing... lol... Could you point out them to me so I can correct them. I'd appreciate it. xD

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks nixbeauty. I'm glad you find my story interesting.

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ainshawal

it's good and very real

to be honest i actually couldn't finish the book because things like this...it felt too real for me -it's not you or your book, just me. i guess, one of the reasons was probably in a sense i'm still innocent.

i actually have no constructive critism for you. i think your a good writer and really captured the story really well (from what i've read)

shia.

p.s if i had the stomach to finish it, i think it... mehr anzeigen

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks a lot ainshawal. Maybe when you're a little older you'll get nerve up enough so you can finish reading "Seduction." I do have other stories you may like though, especially if you're into scifi, fantasy or ghost stories OR like Star Wars. Check out my profile page in order... mehr anzeigen

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nixbeauty

Interesting story concept....It kept me reading.....Good job.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks nixbeauty. :-)

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chrissyissoevil16

that was the best book i ever read :)

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Wow! Thanks so much for the great compliment. It means a great deal to me. Though I generally get favorable reviews on "Seduction" this one is the best by far and I really appreciate it. xD

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks victoria 1984. Sometimes I just don't "get" people. Why do they read novels they don't normally read and then leave rude comments if they don't like the story? Duh! Just close the book dummy! Constructive criticism is fine, but there's no need to be rude and call me a pervert. Just tell me that don't you don't like my book and leave it at that.

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