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victoria1984

sorry, my spack comment was referring to "smileywink" comment. Spack just means idiot(english word!). lol I just dont think people should write horrible comments when you cleary stated the book was not for the faint hearted.

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victoria1984

u spack! dont read books with the description "not for the easily offended"

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Forgive me for not knowing what "spack" means, but I assume it's not pleasant. Regrardless; I thank you for the compliment. xD

I agree... you shouldn't read "Seduction." It's probably far too complicated for you to understand... "A man losing his soul to the devil." It is a... mehr anzeigen

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smileywink

omg ur sick and disgusting u pervert!!! jesus is coming soon and i really hope u dnt get left behind or when ur standing befor god wat r u gonna say? oh i wrote a book about satans child ur just sick

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

No one forced you to read "Seduction" my friend. I did post that my book was not for the easily offended in the description, after all. It's only a fictional account of one man's journey into insanity as he loses his soul to "the dark side" - a horror story which is meant to... mehr anzeigen

susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

P.S.

What will you say to God my friend? I'm not the one who is judging a person just because they don't like what another author has written. ("Judge not; least ye be judged." - "He who has not sinned cast the first stone.") If anything, "Seduction" just describes how easily one... mehr anzeigen

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leslieprovatas

I am on page 41 and if I didn't have writing to to myself today I would just keep reading. This is definately a page turner and I will return as soon as I can. So far as the rating goes, I haven't seen anything overly shocking that I don't see daily on the news or on our beloved crime dramas that depict the insanity of child molestation, an epidemic in this country as well as all other countries were English is the first... mehr anzeigen

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the compliment Leslie. ;-)

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MarisasStories

I wood read it but they wont let me...stinkers.

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MarisasStories

I wood read it but they wont let me...stinkers.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

You must be under 18 then. Sorry. My novel is X-rated and is intended for mature adults. Thanks anyway. ;-)

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arttest

This was a disturbing book.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Agreed, but did you like it? :-?

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lackie

very nice story.. i like the twist and the way "facts" were revealed. I sure hope there will be part 2.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks lackie. Glad you liked my story. Unfortunately the ONLY way it'll ever be published is if I omit the incest and underage sex. It's unreal that in this day and age they won't allow such subjects regarding them as taboo, but NO publishers will publish Seduction as written -... mehr anzeigen

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leynav

It was dark and twisted, but it had the unputdownableness that every good book has. It was hard to read, for me, because of how dark it was and the events that transpired, but I find that it was worth the time. For those who like dark, twisted, sick stories this is a good book for you. (Note this is all in my opinion. I have a fainter heart then others. Also I have no idea where the word unputdownableness came from... hehe)... mehr anzeigen

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Great word - unputdownableness - a frantastic word to descibe "Seduction" to publishers and/or agents in order to submit it, but unfortunately NONE will publish "Seduction" as is due to the incest and underage sex. It's a shame because it is a good story. Regardless; these... mehr anzeigen

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katt.xxx

your book it was amazing and your right it would sell!! it felt like you were giving your own interpretation of how armagedon and the fall of mankind was going to occur using the most of the 7 deadly sins which i think was brilliant!. i will look for this book on the shop floors if you are thinkin of publishing it because i think its an amazing book and i could read it over and over again!... your a very talented writer and... mehr anzeigen

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks so much katt.xxx for you comments on Seduction. Unfortunately, the only way I'll be able to publish this story is if I self-publish which I can't afford. Maybe someday I'll win a lottery and will be able to though... LOL :-D

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