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gg2011

love the book

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l.w.lewis

OMG!!! What a great book but the subject is really difficult for me to read. I am about 1/4 of the way through it now and am needing to take a break for a couple of days. Great story and wonderfully written. Kudos.

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breblkbarbie

i FINALLY fished reading, and i must say BRAVO! ITS WAS SOO ENTICING!!

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks breblkbarbie. Glad you liked my story. Got to get this one out to the public some day cause I'm pretty sure it would sell. Only way would be to self-publish though cause nobody will publish this story due to the incest. All else is okay, but not that. Would can figure...... mehr anzeigen

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mikep20

very interesting book. I was shocked at first then got into the book.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

To tell you the truth I was shocked at what I'd written myself. I couldn't imagine such filth coming from me, but I guess most people aren't so offended that it keeps them from reading "Seduciton." LOL xD

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barbmr1977

I really enjoyed the book. Are their plans for a sequel?

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

I'm very happy that you enjoyed my story. I hadn't really planned on writing a sequel to "Sedcution," but I always try to end my stories with that in mind. I've got some stories that I am writing sequels too that take precedence over "Seduction" though. My Star Wars novel being... mehr anzeigen

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dadooverwiley

I have a hard time seeing erotic stories as scary, but this is does it.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks dadooverwiley. I guess that means you liked "Seduction." Too bad it'll never be published. Even erotic sites won't allow incest, underage sex, or canabalism. Too bad, cause the plot is pretty good. Oh well; maybe I can afford to self-publish it some day. xD

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bloodfang

Best books ever. Strangly, it reminds me of a hentai that i used to watch. Bible Black. Has the same theme to it. Thanks for this amazing book and I hope to read more of your work soon. Have a nice day. -Fang

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks Bloodfang. Glad you liked "Seduction." Have a Happy Holloween. xD

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f.malaikahholden

I am self publishing a few works myself using lulu.com check them out. No I don't work for them but we all are plying our craft here and it doesn't hurt to help! Good luck!

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the info f.malaikahholden. I've heard of lulu before, but didn't think to check them out. Very good idea. xD

susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the info f.malaikahholden. I've heard of lulu before, but didn't think to check them out. Very good idea. xD

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f.malaikahholden

This is YOUR work. I think you did a pretty good job aside from some flow problems and a few grammatical/typographical errors splashed here and there. You did well. Yes it's disturbing but stop apologizing at once! Do you see any "sorry folks" disclaimers in the credits of some of these horrid movies that burn vile images into everyone's brains NOPE! Don't be sorry, be proud of yourself, bravo.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

You're right. I shouldn't make apologies for my work; except for the grammatical/typographical errors. I never was very good at grammer. LOL :-/ Though the content in "Seduction" is very explicit and should gross most people out - maybe even enough to log out - I'm very... mehr anzeigen

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peggysue.2

I'm back on the subject of feigned shock or an unwillingness to accept the inclusion of incest or underage sex in this otherwise well-written and suspenseful thriller. People!! none of the characters are "humans" as we know human to mean. They are the spawn of "Satan",thus incapable of being held to the same moral compass. They have to fulfill a preordained promise to satan,the bane of their existance. The graphic sex and... mehr anzeigen

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Wouldn't it be nice if publishing houses and literary agencies weren't restricted by such rigid rules? They could at least look over one's work before excluding a story because of such taboos - judging each tale on merit and the interest an author's story holds. There's little I... mehr anzeigen

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