This was so beautiful... I loved every bit. I have no words. Voted!

It is always so exciting when new, interesting and very special writers are discovered here. You have my vote.

I came, I read, I voted

Your work shines just like the star you write about. Clear, haunting, passionate, different and haunting. Poetry meshed with an unique story. I humbly vote. Robynn

Everything about this short story is exceptional. You have the voice of a true romantic. The pathos, the irony was not lost, Miguel. I voted gladly. Fabulous plot and narrative.

and the story super! Thanks for the link to it...Paula

Great story also well presented...strange ending...not expected. BUT those are the kind I love.
Laz
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This was a wonderful story. It was difficult to load at times due to the size of the font but that made no difference as to the uniqueness of the story. I enjoyed it!./joeparente/voted

It's a great start and I feel like you put some very nice work into this, but please. MAKE THE TEXT BIGGER! No one can read it.