omg its a really good book i usually dont like mysterys so i was reluctant to read it but when i did i am interested 2 find out what happens its soooo good!!!!

omg its a really good book i usually dont like mysterys so i was reluctant to read it but when i did i am interested 2 find out what happens its soooo good!!!!

Very good beginning! Let me know when you add more. :)

Thanks to everyone who'se read it and given feedback! It means so much to me! :) Xx

It's quite good! Very interesting how you staged the beginning.
Keep me posted, Agatha:)

Please do let me know when you have written more.

Quick note: First page, the word 'could' is spelled incorrectly as 'coild'. It happens. Great start!

I also, love the cover photo!

I found the beginning very interesting. The whole mystery with supernatural hints is quite compelling. I hope you continue posting, I would love to see where you go with this.