This was a very unique and creative take on Flash Fiction. It was very poetic and visual. Brilliant job!

See my answer to Laz - truly appreciate your evaluation - love those wows!

I am glad this caught you and yeah this can be scary but the end tells it all

WOW, Paula! This one is so unique, so literary! I'm knocked out!

I found your piece inspirational and very poetic. You have a way with words, lovely very, very lovely. And quite scary at the same time... lovely scary kind of thing. But bravo nonetheless.

Blessings,
Meli

and keeping! ...I was going between thoughts and happenings and actually wanted a positive ending or a new beginning

Good first lines to set both past and immediate present

Love paragraph that starts- Techology tauted as new...

My spirit rising again- yes never is dead, always going to find a way to bloosom again-

Really like "How evil cloaks the eyes to love"
Have all the important pieces sometimes flow could be smoother. Great read. thanks

Very powerful and poignant. Laz is right. It should have gone in the EOTW contest, but now it's here, in flash.

Favorite line. "The caps, uncorked and raining bullets of fire." Lovely!

Good job and good luck in the contest.
Wendyxxx

When one of you writers I admire so much says wow to one of my stories, it makes me want to hit the keyboard...

Wow...are you sure you have the right contest. This should have been in the EOW contest...lol
Well done Paula.