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The story starts off well and the end was a real surprise
The story starts off well and the end was a real surprise
One has to be careful about their choice of their true love. Very good "gotcha" ending to this.
Your writing is strong, yet your dialogue is stronger! I loved it!
Amazing twist. I was left with awe at the ending. I agree with everyone else, great dialogue you had me going until the very end. Loved it!
knew the temptress was more than a face value lure but never expected what it turned out to be..
The story was excellent and the twist was wonderful! Great work!
Wow, that was VERY well written and surprising. I hope it's in the flash fiction contest!
Impressive writing, Paper. Beautiful flow and dialogue exchanges. You had me going right up until the end...and I u-tubed Sixx AM:)
Very cool!
Nice twist. The imagery is very good. I could picture everything. Well written. Nice job.
Hugs,
Lee