many, many thanks everyone for the great support; it warms my heart :)

It's creepy. loved it. u have my vote :)

You are so talented. Nice job on this story. It is unusual, creepy and realistic. Written well. Voted Robynn

I really enjoyed your story. Very creative and lyrical in places, as Pat said. Great job!

Very very different from any other one here. You really do have a vivid imagination.
Voted for it.
Laz

so much for encouragement and stars ;) always appreciating your kindness. Manjit

I think this piece is so different...so imaginative. Really like it, plus your narrative is so often lyrical. Excellent!

I loved your book such wonderful descriptive phrasing.I will gladly give you my vote. Serena

need to put it on facebook and twitter for more readers!