I enjoyed the story, & have voted.
Chris

Exceptional story. You deserve a shot at the judging with this, Lucky:) I voted:)

Awesome--sorry about that word, but it fits:) Your narrative is flawless, the story grabbed hold of me...the quest! The roadblocks...and then the delightful resolution.
Perfect!

Very original story. It was cute. :)

What a gem! Like the ending of your story, you don't have to ask for my vote - you already have it!

really great book

Thank you goodluklady, lesliethompson,eachna, paulashene, and lazarus67. You all are so sweet:)

Olivia, that was absolutely adorable...and I certainly did not expect the ending. Very deserving of being in the contest and I shall vote in August. Well done indeed!!

Seems to me that the girl in the chicken suit is going to have her hands full with this guy. LOL This was great and a whole lot of fun. Let me know if you enter it in the contest so I can vote for it.

I really like this story, it's pretty interesting, and original. I just think that you could try to make it a little bit more detailed, but I do realize that you have a word limit. But maybe some editing and cutting might make it even better than it already is.

Eachna