Really enjoyed your story and I agree just like Pat said you are a true romantic. Thats not bad, you have a vote from me. Serena

You have a true gift. It was like I was watching a movie in my mind. I could see the colors and shapes and Mara and Doxi like they were real.

Thanks Val and Melissa, Oh, yes, that would be so wonderful! Why do you think I wrote about it?
Laz

I hope you are posting your stories in the Fantasy and science fiction department here. You are certainly skilled and I loved this one. If only we could all just leave and find our soul mate on another planet.............a very different concept for the end of the world

Yes...you're right. I can always go back in time (oops , I mean HE can always go back in time and revisit his past life)

I voted

Thank you all

pulling this story together - I especially was eager to read it as I had read about Justin's previous stay with Mara...and yes, you have a true romantic heart which spills into your story telling

I just love your writing. Voted!

The end of one person's world but the beginning of another's! As all good writer's do, you have borrowed from the present to create a world. Nice dialog flow, good characterization. I agree with Pat, you are forever the romantic! Fantastic job, I voted!