The fact that I have not yet lived to experience the love and longing you describe here.

Another great one. One vote from me.

Just beautiful!

I came, I read, I voted. Awesome as always

It earns my vote because it is worth it! Robynn

Wow! Thanks you all for those nice comments. These are much better than any prize. I was going to submit the other story, but now I think I should post this one.

A moment in time caught in such captivating emotion wrapped words. Such longing, such depth of soul portrayed here. I agree with all those comments before me. This is truly a love poem worthy of any contest. Robynn

Wonderful poetic style,Laz...a real love letter...amazing write ,Mara.

I think you have a winner here./joeparente

beautiful and touching...