Yeah that's fine

Okay, cool. ')

thanks

The kind like Heart Break it a book on my profile I am righting it read sometime if u get the check

Sure! Maybe you could check out one of mine, too. They're kinda long, but most of them are either full-length novels or the beginning chapters of a novel. I do have some shorter ones, though, if you don't have time to read longer stuff. You might this one - it's a completed (very) short story:

http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-judy-colella-the-hunt/

Let me know what you think. I'll go check yours out, too. ')

That's a pretty intense story line! If you put each line of dialogue into a new paragraph it will be easier to read, but I like how you set up the tension right away. It makes the reader want to know what's happening, why it's happening, and where it will go. Keep working on it. Be sure to check other books to see how to format your story, but be sure to continue this. ')

Umm hey
My friend request button doesn't work.. I think it's broken or something and so does the message buttons .. So can you please send me FR. CUZ many times I need help for my poems and I want to PM but that message button hates me so much that I don't what to say...

So
Please..

And btw I just came up with another poem.
And I need to know what you think about it and. I'll really appreciate all short of comment ... Appraisal will encourage me to write more... And criticism will encourage me to improve...
Here is the link

http://www.bookrix.com/post/profile;content-id:od769a39eb26f45,id:2401886.html

Thank you

Abhinav.

Okay - I got your friend request and confirmed it. ')

thanksssss :D

Hey, Cat - I'm good. How about you? Hope all is well. 'D

well my dog needs stiches in his lower.eye lid but beside that im great :)

Let's not be empty... it's still a new year... even is coming new year... how is your American dream?

(ALSO happy new year Patrick the star)

Thanks - I'm delighted that you like it! Wow!