The way you write your story is not offensive neither humorous. I find it naughty, and I think the form is sort of a satire. It depicts the reality about priesthood through the character of a pope. I know people who left the seminary to marry and raise a family. There are really priests who have kids even if they are still in the church service. Although for me, it doesn’t make them a bad person. It looks bad only because it is against the Catholic system, but the Bible doesn’t say that it’s a sin to raise a family if you’re in God’s ministry. Just my opinion. . . .

This is a good Trashy Tabloid News entry. Enjoy your week!

I was rolling! Loved it!

I know that god has a great deal of humour (look at giraffes), but I'm not sure about our German Pope Ratzinger. ;0)

Benny the Boop ... LOL!!

Best wishes, DublinerTinte

great story

I loved it. Great job!

I think you've blown everyone else out of the water, haha. As usual, this was a charming piece, with plenty of giggles included. Well done :)

Lol. well done.

Really great! Gave me a good set of lol's. Very well done!

I absolutely loved it, Patrick. Very funny.

Funny, funny, funny.