Its an awsum bk I love it!

This story was so... nice. I have no way to explain it. The ending felt so sweet and made out of love. It made me feel like jumping eeek! LOVED it :D.

ohh i teared up!

your stories allways touch my haert i felt lke i was in the story keep writing and floolow your dreams and you will have a great future ahead of you all so i have a request of a typ of stopry iwant something magical and a farytail sort of. but any ways lovely i love the words you used you are allmosta a true writer good job

A sweet story, but it lacks any real atmosphere and doesn't grab you. I failed to see a real 'hook' to keep the interest going. You tend to state the obvious, and repeat yourself. Plus there are some spelling and grammatical mistakes. (Are you writing for the American market or British?) But, a good attempt overall.

Thanks so much for the comments! Everyone's kind words warm my heart!

I did not completely finish it, but what I read was really great! I think this story should be turned into a movie!
Liz

I finally got around to reading this book. I loved it. It is just like your screen name "Ever captivating". You have a beautiful style of writing. I will continue to read your work.

Uh-uh! Tell me the spelling and grammar errors. I need others to help me see what I missed. So happy you enjoyed it. It's nice to know that it is entertaining and hooks the reader. Love it!! Hugs!

It was a very well written and hooking story. There were a few minor spelling or grammar mistakes, but they were very unnoticeable. I really enjoyed it and i couldn't stop reading. Which is good for me becuase it doesn't happen alot. I really enjoyed it and hope to read another.