This was one of those books that makes your heart go pitter-patter!! What a great read!

This was a lovely book. Funny, sweet, evrything you could want from a book I think! I voted for it too xx

Reminded me of my youth in so many ways....and then of course, Charlie reminded me of my boyfriend, John. If you read my story THE LOVER, you will see the similarities. Very BRIDGET JONES DIARY in style and compelling. One teeny tiny critique....you keep using the word "then" rather than "than" and "wondering" instead of "wandering." Those were the only two glitches I could find. You have my vote for sure. Good luck. Val

Ash! My former filler-friend and now my Bestie in Branson! I love you girl. Gotta love that honesty. I was just reading over it and tweaked it... Egads it never ends.

Love you girl! Thanks for the vote and for actually reading. Bonus that you liked too.

so i finally read this story and voted cause yes i liked it. to be honest i was just going to vote and not read it. then i felt guilty, so i was going to "skim" a few pages, but then i started actually reading it and it was AWESOME my friend!
great job, great read. you go on with your bad self!!! luv ya lady
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I have been so busy reading and voting... I haven't been able to comment on this page. Great competition! Thank you all for your comments. I'm glad you like the short story and I'm enjoying your comments immensely! Wow! Wow! Wow! Thanks so much, I feel like a million dollars and slowly growing more confident. Hugs!

Well written indeed; very good pacing and your command for describing people is clearly bar none... Story did a good job in holding my attention and piquing my interest as to whether or not Megan and Charlie would get together... great job..

what a tear jerker. it moves the heart. i myself write about love. but it's ironic because i don't believe in it.

It sounded like a fairytale, but it was written like a true to life story of love, pain, disappointment, and happy-ending. I enjoyed it! Just voted!

Wonderful!
Just to understand how much I loved it, I gave up my favorite drama serial to finish it...and I wait for more pieces like this.
So let me know when you get published, I'll be your faithful buyer lol.