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Gelöschter User

just wonderful and true, went through this myself years ago... not with my husband but boy-friend. - Keep on writing, please!

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brutallyhonest

I guess I'm in the minority. In both honesty and standards.

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poupee

I found your poem very sad. You want and yet again you don't

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evercaptivating

Thank you, I hope she enjoys it.

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evercaptivating

I am so glad you enjoyed it! Hugs!

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jacobfan162

This is the best peom i have ever read this is so good please tell me when you write more.=)

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evercaptivating

Thanks for the comments. My heart is full!

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evangheline

Emotion packed and beautiful, I like the confilicting emotions.. the desire not to be hurt again, yet the strong desire to be loved. Well done :-) You have my vote.

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evercaptivating

Thanks and I will return the favor!

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blackbeard

Thanks for recommending Amorphous by Tom Reese. You're right a great work.

You got my vote for The Push and Pull of You as well as a Star. One of these days you guys will have to return the favor-to read, not necessarily vote for one my stories/poems. Best of luck to all the people I voted for.

Jack

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