This has some very nice poetic imagery. I liked it. The ending was a nice, stark comparison.

This is very good poetry. I think the symbolically the husband or lover is a anti-hero hat goes back to hereo. I think ironically she loves him but does he actually repent. The question is where is his HEART?

Excellent!

You do know the male species.

It is mine! Hehehee

I think I just fell in love again.
Nevermind my vote...take my heart.

A great example of why some women pick Mr. Wrong.. I enjoy your writting. Good luck.

I thought you had a unique way of giving in to the one you don't BUT DO want to love. I enjoyed your writing./joeparente