of the butterflies crush...the highten awareness of the longing for what may never be....you beautifully conveyed these feelings...

I'm going to cry. Thanks so much.

You hit it!
Every word was a note, poetically speaking, in an incredible composition of longing.
I was going to pull out words and phrases as examples of the power here...a thief...replaying the way...this compulsion. The entire poem is this! Pure lyricism.

Wonderfully written so warm and tender./joeparente

Flows like a song, a river of longing, lovely and light. Thank you for sharing such an intimate poem. Robynn

Incredibly beautiful. Almost like a song...nearly moved me to tears.
Vote?...Yes!

This is so luscious. I am so impressed and captivated by the images and wistful longing. Just great!

Very nice. please let me know whenever you post more would love to read them

Thank you rylie5hale and manjitpreetam, I'm stunned by your comments.

I believe you’re correct Manjitpreetam when you say 'incurable romantic heart'.

I am extremely overjoyed that you enjoy my poem, my heart on the page that I could cry!

I feel this poem coming from the depths of your incurable romantic heart...and still so realistic. You caught that feeling so masterfully; congratulations! Thanks for a great reading.