Well done!

I'm impressed by your ability to blend two personalities into one story. This is an unique idea. Written well, with a good build in the tension. Though not my genre it did pull me in and keep my interest. Good Job. Robynn

I like the way you tied in the news reports to a diary. It was well transitioned from victim to perpetrator to reporter. well done and deserving of a vote./joeparente

This is a very creative and gripping story. I don't want to give anything away for the other readers, but your lines, 'I know it was childish... I know it wasn't her fault and I forgave her later.' was brilliant. The darkness, so to speak, was powerful and disturbing, which is what you intended I'm sure. Fantastic story!

Side note: Page 7 Jan 10th entry, the line should be corrected to, 'God, I hope NO one killed themselves'. You have it as the word 'know'. It happens.

I loved this book, I can see myself reading it again and again. Wish you the best. GOOD LUCK!

I loved this book, I can see myself reading it again and again. Wish you the best. GOOD LUCK!