I saw the passing of time... gliding on a breeze. I thought it was sweet and graceful, flowing wonderfully along the page. The readability is easy and elegant. I am very impressed.
I posted a poem earlier tonight. I would appreciate your opinion, if you want. Thanks!

Thank you Robynn I have been thinking about putting it in the Love contest.

Clean, crisp, good meter, wonderful word pictures, gentle love. If you haven't put it in any other contests you should enter it in the upcoming Love poetry contest. It's very good. Robynn