Really terrific, Maddy! The story was wonderful, though sad, and I too was impressed how you incorporated Facebook into the format. Excellent!
This is a good style in writing a diary. The story of Olivia is quite sad because she suffered from enormous bullying that drives her to lose excessive weight. Bullying doesn’t happen only in school, but it occurs in offices or workplace, too. If you are the target of bullying, do not let bullies win. Have the courage to report it to management, authorities or tell somebody about it. Keeping it quiet is more harmful to the... mehr anzeigen
I love how you used the FB comments. Very fun, the ending was sad, but you did a great job with this. Hugs!
I like your story very much. The ending was to sad but things like that can happen. I liked how you had the comments on facebook. Good Job.You have my vote. Serena
Wow! really good. Most of us don't see what we have until we lost it.
Luv it.
OMG i cried i love it so much ha ha i knew you would take my idea for it lol i am a good friend after all!!!!! :D keep it up maddy luv ya lots babe xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx :D
Just...wow! How DID you come up with this? It's really fresh!
Congratulations!
I have never really read a whole book in one sitting. This book actually had me going for my whole lunch break. You did an amazing job. I will definitely vote. Keep up the good work, the ending was flawless.
I know good friends don't argue but YOU'RE NOT FAT KIM!!!!! ok so you're covered in freckles but babe, lucy thorpe is more popular than you and she's ugly as hell. just goes to show looks aren't everything.