I loved this!
So clever.
Your work is amazing.

Funny, witty, clever, definitely naughty and strangely tragic all woven brilliantly in the unmistakable NBC style. Barry, I'm giving you the big clap on this one.

That was great. I loved the narrative. We all new she would choose her handmaiden but I had NO! idea of the ending.

In any other story you'd think that ending abrupt but it was absolutely perfect! I laughed my ass off :)

The book is funny. Lol. I loved it

OK, it was worth the ten minutes! LMAO!!

Once again you show great writing skill. My friend from Michigan.

I attempt to answer this question here:

http://www.bookrix.com/_groupforum-en-rubbed-the-wrong-way-4.html

It was supposed to be sleazy! This IS the erotica group. :) Barry, I spent more of the time reading this shaking my head and laughing. What was the original tale?

Short, but to the point. An enjoyable tale.

omg that was soo ockward...i love it!!!!