Written in a professional and readable manner is correct! I really enjoyed your format, it made it easier for me to understand and get into the story that much faster. I haven't make it all the way to the end, but I am loving this story. It's worth a vote! I'll finish it up tomorrow.
You got my vote! Such a talent.
I got to read this when it was still in the works, and I love the way it turned out! I also got a great example of what a screen play should look like if I ever dare to try my hand at one.
Wonderful job.
In all honesty, at first I tried to envision what kind of mushrooms grow around Barry's locale. An imagination this stong would have to be chemically enhanced.
But the more I read, the more I became enthralled with a gripping tale of suspense and mystery. The story begs you to try and deduce numerous issues...none of which you'll fully comprehend until the final credits roll.
I look forward to seeing this on the big screen... mehr anzeigen
Very well done, Barry. A gripping screenplay that could definitely be picked up as a feature film. You wrote this in a very professional and readable manner - even for those (like me) who shy away from this genre. I stuck through it, and enjoyed every moment, becoming more and more immersed with every page. Congratulations!