Hello melissa...i'm from malaysia. I would like to know if all the ebook here can be resell? Thank you.

I like the idea of the Dragon Girl. Talk about awesome! I see you've also have a Fairy Tail fanfiction I'll have to give that a read.

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(SPOILER WARNING, for readers who haven’t finished reading Dawn of Change, please do not read my comment, i might have put a little spoiler here)

Hello ! I've read your Fairy Tail Fanfiction : Dawn of Change, and i wanted to support you further by giving my review on your book ! I’m really hoping you keep writing another book, or maybe continuing this DoC, because I had favourited your style of imaginating something new, you’re creative, and i already enjoyed reading two of your books.

On this book, I liked your imagination and storyline (maybe because we have a similar style of imaginating because we both watched some anime, lol). I always dreaming, like,oh God, when will i find this marvelous digital world and pet Agumon. I’m dying to watch his evolve to Wargreymon at my own eyes near the scene! And i think you might have the same imagination, like, you want to get involved into that Fairy Tail world, so you wrote this fanfiction. xD
Okay, for the review, i noticed that you were putting too much of 1st person style-perspective (Roxanne’s perspective), especially at the beginning of the story until page 29. You writed too much Roxanne’s perspective, her thinking,her feelings,almost everything in her mind written here, while you just put a minority details of other-protagonist’s perspective. If it’s a 3rd person-perspective, you should put a “balance”. Details for details, or just put some adjectives and conversation and done. For example, if i were you, i would also try to balance it if i putting too much of Roxanne’s perspective,i will also write and explain natsu and lucy’s detailed conversation, put their feelings, and their words in their minds written,since they’re debating on saving Roxanne and bring her to their hotel. So, my reader will “know everything” on the book, as the 3rd person-perspective. And, this confusing perspective get caught in page 31. When you mention lucy as “she”, you didn’t mention Roxanne first before adding “she” again, so the first time i read it, i thought it was Lucy who was telling her background story, not Roxanne.

Well this case will be a different story if you put a 1st person-perspective on DoC from beginning, it won’t matter, i will still enjoy it because i put all of my perspective like “I (the reader) am Roxanne). But from what i saw, you put a 3rd person-perspective on DoC, while keeping your 1st person-perspective writing style (like your “Dragon Girl” book), so i’m a little confused when i’m putting myself as a third person when reading this book, like “ I am God of this book, i know everything. But why can’t i read natsu and lucy’s thinking and feelings too? *cry*”.

So, i think, you should give more perspective on the other protagonists, not only focused on the main antagonist (Roxanne), although, i know, you must make the reader focused and have the most attention to her. The funny thing is, when i try to imagine putting an “I” for every roxanne’s “she”, it did fit on me, and i could enjoy better than when i reading a “she”. So, for this case, i suggest you to ask another people besides me about what they feel on this DoC perspective, because maybe it’s just my different taste that made me feel it doesn’t fit, while your perspective are absolutely normal and fit. Hehehe. If your survey’s result are a “it’s normal”, then please consider my perspective review as my request to you to make more of other progatonist’s perspective details, so i could enjoy exploring the characters and world better. :D

For phrasing and such, you did a better job than your “Dragon Girl” book,so, well done ! Although I still found something wrong on the words/phrase/tems, but it’s only a few and made me already forgot which one. Just do a proofreading and it will be done, for sure ! :D

Despite i was confused by the perspective, i still favourited this book, because it has a good plot. The part that interest me most, is about her family robbed and such. It’s a lie, isn’t it? And she’s crying? OMG. If she is really lied, i would give her an oscar, she got talent, wrote the script in her brain and played it herself. She deserves it better than DiCaprio. But if it isn’t a lie..OMG, her story is too much, sadness. :””””(((((

It’s an interesting story, i can understand why you rushing it and not continuing it for a while, life is hard. But i still hoping you would write more often, maybe someday. I will always support you.That’s all, Good work, keep going ! :D

(SPOILER WARNING for readers,please do not read my comment if you haven’t finished reading Dragon Girl, i think i put a little spoiler here, sorry)

Hello ! My pen name’s Chung, and i’m your fan starting from now, because i liked your book ! :D

I've read your “Dragon Girl” book, and i like it ! It has a nice story and plot,there’s some joke in the story too, i love the sidejokes, haha! And now, i’m feeling like I’m a scylla, because I always more active and have a good mood at night. :p
Here’s my personal review, with all respect, please no hard feelings, i’m trying my best to crosscheck my words here to not to be offensive because i really liked your story and i just want to try to support you to be better. 

I think there is some plothole in this book. I think, maybe you should give more of Melaine/Samantha and Demetri's background story, such as why was she different from her parents, was she just a foster daughter? and(if you already write this, maybe it’s me who missread or forget, sorry, hehe) And, how and where did Demetri got his good appraisal knowledge of gold pricing? i’m pretty sure it would be better if you give more “soul” at the beginning and backgrounds story or adding some flashbacks,especially when you explained where sam got her character, because she has a very interesting character as a main protagonist. She’s strong, for this,you had explained enough why by telling her Tae Kwon Do background. And i’m still wondering where and how did she have a smart business strategy), she had my attention. When reading it, i just felt the “soul” or excitement when i reached the middle of the story. But i give my applause on how you explain sam’s householding skills,it’s perfect !
And maybe you can give better or more correct words and tems to be more clearly describe something that subject doing. For example, on your words, “I caught my kills”, i think it will be better if you write “I caught my prey”.

In the middle until the end of story, i noticed that you don’t connect some facts on your chapters, i think that’s why i didn’t get any interesting climax, just a “fateful reunion”. Maybe i was expecting too much for more excitement about the dragon war story, i want to know more about the scyllas, i was hoping you would make a “great” super-antagonist scylla person, or something like that, but the storyline has no problem, technically. Maybe it’s just me who expect too much. Hehehe.

And i think you didn’t describe enough my “why” questions when i’m reading it,for example, i wonder if the castle maids/servants are also drakonians, so they’re not afraid and frightening out of Sam cs, just like sam’s boyfriends did? And if they’re humans and do not know that Sam cs were dragons, why they do not give any suspicion to Sam cs in that super-huge castle? I will be suspicious if i were a human servant working in that castle day and night, like, why the castle’s so huge, and why i often smell weird air/atmospheric in the castle, like a dragon has breathing here, and so on.

That’s all of my review. Please, correct me if i wrong too. Because i’m also a novice writer who tries my best to be a good reviewer and writer. xD
And hey, maybe we can do some collaboration on writing fanfiction together sometimes? I have read Fairy Tail too, but just a few chapters. I’m on my way reading your Fairy Tail fanfiction now.

Keep going, loved your writing !

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Nice I will read the rest of them..

Mister ,is great No plot holes or errors that I can see