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angamonkey

thanks for the comments and votes.i kinda did want it to look like the whole some guy worshiping and loving alcohol vs loving a woman.

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composer

I would shout 'here here' to that but then I would get into so much trouble with somebody(s) else that I dare not risk it, instead let me just salute you in silence by vote.

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poupee

I like the comparison. Yet I think the lover loved the wine more than a girl.

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angamonkey

thanks robynn :D

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Rgabel

Never thought of a bottle's curves being equated to that of a woman, great analogy. Emotion spoken eloquently. Good job Robynn

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angamonkey

oh sorry about the where-were mistake...i seem to be doing that a lot lately >_

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evercaptivating

This poem is beautifully written and I loved it!

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gooduklady

This is very good indeed. I am impressed. Just make one change, please. The contents WERE cold (not where).

Very pleasing indeed. Well done.

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angamonkey

:D thank you. hopefully i'll be able to post up some more work soon

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joeparente

Hi Angely
This was good. You should write more. I could tell you have a good heart./joeparente

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