thanks for the comments and votes.i kinda did want it to look like the whole some guy worshiping and loving alcohol vs loving a woman.
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thanks for the comments and votes.i kinda did want it to look like the whole some guy worshiping and loving alcohol vs loving a woman.
I would shout 'here here' to that but then I would get into so much trouble with somebody(s) else that I dare not risk it, instead let me just salute you in silence by vote.
I like the comparison. Yet I think the lover loved the wine more than a girl.
Never thought of a bottle's curves being equated to that of a woman, great analogy. Emotion spoken eloquently. Good job Robynn
oh sorry about the where-were mistake...i seem to be doing that a lot lately >_
This poem is beautifully written and I loved it!
This is very good indeed. I am impressed. Just make one change, please. The contents WERE cold (not where).
Very pleasing indeed. Well done.
:D thank you. hopefully i'll be able to post up some more work soon
Hi Angely
This was good. You should write more. I could tell you have a good heart./joeparente