BookRix

Add more..u have a good start so far.

Have you ever been really disappointed that your book has ended unexpectedly on you? That's what happened when I read your book. Sure, there are a few errors in correct grammar, but that never makes a good story bad. Great work, and good luck on the rest! ^v^

p.s. Can you tell me when you update next? I really like the book!

Ii will keep wriying im going to post it all together i fine it easier so i can go through and edit some things. Thanks for checking my book out

it was alright but i wish there was a little more to it
hope u keep righting want to now more