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Well I have to say that I'm impressed. I really like your work, it's amazing! :)

Well I have to say that I'm impressed. I really like your work, it's amazing! :)

i like it cool :P

i like this book!

nice metonymy

''The river of tears blurs his sight''

nice meditative poems..you got my vote

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Hey Zachary, thank you for sharing your work with me. I found the story interestng in that it seems to deal with a boy who has suffered the loss of his family in a most savage and brutal way. Worse yet he has been forced to watch the carnage. I found the writing a bit hard to follow, but I'm an old fart so maybe it was just me. Ice and Fire was a bit harder for me as I'm no poet. Some of the poems I enjoyed and others seemed to be forced. I think, based on meter, some should be written in free form as opposed to trying to force the rhyme. Again thanks for giving me the opportunity to read your work. cf

A nice collection of poems straight from the heart. Keep up the good work.

I especially liked If Tomorrow Was Forever. The font was a bit small and the background made it hard to read parts of the poems. You have a lot of potential!