Dark Shadows

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User: Nikki613
Dark Shadows

(STILL IN PROGRESS) A young girl who didn't know who she was until she found magic, Blair Blackwell must face off demons and evil spirits as she search for answers of who she truly is and why she is being chased by an evil dark shadow.


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Attleboro, MA

Millions of people here in America and around the world hit the streets to
protest the Iraq 'shock and awe'. Didn't phase the Masters of War at all, did
it? What would be different this time? Now we have a 'leader' who would love
to sic armed police against peaceful protest. Water cannons would roll.

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Salt Lake City, Utah

Trump is the chaos president. The more chaos he stirs up, the more his support
erodes among his base, and among the billionaire class that so far has
supported him, and their Republican lackeys in Congress.

Chaos is poison in re-election terms. Nothing will hurt the reelection chances
of a sitting president and his party more than chaos, political scientists
tell us. Above all, voters crave stability and... mehr anzeigen

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At the moment, the story is great but there are points where you could explain yourself. The bomb exploding could have been another nymphs work and the ogre comes out of nowhere. And Yeah, you got the scenery details but definitely not how everyone looks? What happens to Matt and Heather. You started talking about a complete new adventure though you don't add anything about the life that they left. But i like how you add... mehr anzeigen

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Nikki613

Thank you! This is why i love feedback. I will definitely go back and work on those things.

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anthea12

I think the Storie is great so far. I just would love to know how everything looks. Where do they live how do they look ?

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Nikki613

okay, thanks I'll be sure to go back and cover that :)

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