i love this book nice storyline and i like the characters, you should write more, one thing i have to say you missed a few words out making it hard to understand. but other than that I LOVE THIS BOOK WRITE MORE PLEASE^_^
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This book is so well written and great to read!!
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This is just AWSOME!! please write more soon!!! x :)
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THIS BOOK IS THE BEST BOOK I HAVE EVER READ. ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE IT?
HOPE YOU DO.
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love it please finish it and email when u do please and thanx
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There should be more! Its really good besides the grammer errors! I think Im in love with the plot~
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verb tenses need some work, but this is great! i'm not one for romance and i still want to find out what happens to Pama!
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I am intrigued to read more.
Please post in the Teen Writers & Writing group, when you update this story.
Chris
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this story was amazing you need to finish it let me know when you add more i can't wait to read the rest :)
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