I'm glad you give positive critsism. :) I am gonna work on it.. Believe me I will...but I hope I do good!
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Tiff,
You have written a very touching true life story.
With a couple of edits like the word Thier should be (their)and padiatrition should be (pediatrician). Please check your spacing too. You will be good to go. Great start I look forward to reading more.
Good work!
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