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What a joy it is to read something devoid of spelling and grammar mistakes, a story line that doesn't leave you going, "Uh, what?" and an idea that makes you think. Your writing has an easy flow and the structure is simply wonderful. Your choice of character and subject is unique - I'm deeply impressed by your talent. Amazing job!

Can you only be in your twenties? This is the work of what appears to be a more mature, seasoned writer, and for that I congratulate you.

What an amazing imagination you have, coupled with the ability to describe this creature with such minute detail. Are you certain you were not one yourself in a prior incarnation?

Truly unique with a fast-flowing pace that leads to what, unfortunately, we knew would happen. Despite the expected ending, you brought us there with a well-executed plot and perfect imagery. You are an excellent writer and will only get better and better.

Another very interesting and unique story with good flow and nice character development. I especially enjoyed the dialogue sequences which appear later in the story and give a nice break from the narrative. Nice job!