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MORE PLEASE

Awsome! I cant wait to read more.

Hey just wanted i will be updating some of my books here soon so ya.

Very nice. reading more of this could make my day ;)

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

Terrific start to a good story.
There is an issue with no spacing at the end of each sentence. This is just a minor correction. good job.
Spelling:cloths should be clothes

You have a wonderful start here. Need some tightening in spelling and grammar, but great descriptions, good dialog, good character building and interplay. So where do they go from here? Robynn

Interesting beginning. Like the cowboy vamp idea. Enjoyed the first installment. Hope to read more on this. :)

I love this book can`t wait till it`s updated !!!!!!!!!!!

please leave comments.i would love to hear what you think.