BookRix

Love it

so far so good when is the net time u think you'll be updating

Great!! book ;)

Okay, there are quite a few grammar and punctuation mistakes but that can be fixed easily. The beginning is interesting, you had me fooled with thinking Lisa was a human, yet although interesting it is kind of slow going in the pacing department, and it's hard to see where the story is going.
I like how you're not telling us how Callum and Chrissy's relationship is, but showing us through their interactions with each other.
The sentences can get a little choppy, you might want to work on smoother transitions.
I do like the over all story. I hope this helps you, and that you continue writing it.
Good Luck!

Awesome books keep up the GREAT work!
faithxx