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That kind of blind love is, indeed, universal, and you capture its devastating consequences very well.

You need some major editing in terms of grammar (your spelling is perfect, though), and there should be spaces between the paragraphs for clarity, but once that's done, you'll have a real gem.

I hope you plan to continue it, and share more of your character's journey. This has enormous potential!

Broken seems like a nice title for this particular story and it like a fairy tale of some sort where your in love with this guy and all your feelings for him take over compleatly i think this will make a #1 seller hit

Write more.... The story can be developed further... Good to read..