BookRix

plz upload soon i find this story very intresting

You also need to edit the chapter some.

I like your intro to this story. I am going to keep tabs on this one, just so I could see what happens through out and in the end. Great beginning.

i think wot u meant woz that your sobs teared your CHEST apart.. chess is a game. ????????

hey this is yo cuz askari bumphus how are you i didnt know you were on here call my sis bump so we could holla

hey this is yo cuz askari bumphus how are you i didnt know you were on here call my sis bump so we could holla

hey this is yo cuz askari bumphus how are you i didnt know you were on here call my sis bump so we could holla

Write more. Oh and you need to work on capitilization and spelling. But still, pretty good.: )

Needs A Spell Check

i love ur book u shuld write more