lifeless troubles

the signs were there.... Von:
User: fflores1
lifeless troubles
bert and jaclyn, two best friends journey out to sea for vacation when a terrible storm attacked the boat making it hard to win over the storm. they found themselves crashed in a deserted island where strange things lurk on land. beasts never seen before and unimaginable. time is ticking when they need to find a way out.survival. how it ends will shock you...

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island, bert, jaclyn, romance
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andrewn10

Hi, it's nice :)
I have an offer related to writing story and I'd like to talk about it.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.

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R.E. Cooper

It was great! I loved it. There were. a few grammar issues but it wasn't bad. Honestly 9/10 would read again and recommend. The only things is the ending was a bit strange to me, it was a open ended in a confusing way. But honestly it was amazing.

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smcorb

I loved it, but it was really sad. It also had some grammar issues, but I give it a thumbs up! :)

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fflores1

Thank you so much for the comment :) i will be writting more and i know haha i have to work on that haha :)

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