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well i re-wrote the whole thing and fixed mistakes and added stuff things like that..if you want to read it the book is on wattpad and writen up to like chapter 19... my profile link ---> http://www.wattpad.com/user/shaakira96
hope u like it :)
sorry u couldnt understand on here
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Can u still please update here because I'm having famliy problems right now and I am waiting so please update too
the story got really confusing on chapter two
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hi im glad you like my story black rose. im
trying to get connected with as many fans as
possible. for some reason i cannot upload the
couple of chapters on bookrix. so i have switched
to https://www.wattpad.com because a friend of mines
told me it was so much better and i agree. i can
be more connected to fans on that website (which
i want) and i can upload pictures of what the
characters look like, you as a fan can write
a comment... mehr anzeigen
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what how can you end it like that! were is the action were is the whole story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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At the start of the book i couldn't quite understand it, and i hate to criticize. I couldn't help but notice the use of slang in your story as well and also the fact that you seemed to skip straight from one subject to another, which takes away any effect no matter how good the actual writing is. I loved the story line and while others would say it's unrealistic but i say it is fantastic. I love the fact that you also added... mehr anzeigen
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