Kiss,Kiss,Goodbye

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User: sereni
Kiss,Kiss,Goodbye
This is a poem about unrequited love.How a woman has to leave the man she loves but no matter where she goes she still is reminded that she loves him no matter what.

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love, pierced, jeweled corridors.
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sereni

Thank you so much for reading my poem. I am always thrilled to know that what I've written was enjoyed.

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Gelöschter User

That was wonderful. I really like it :)

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Gelöschter User

Powerful words to convey the heartache she is suffering, and it will remain with her forever.

This is really great, well done and good luck.

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sereni

You can't imagine how thrilled I am when I get a comment on something I have written. I never imagined I would be doing this. I feel so blessed to have a new chapter in my life , and I thank you again for your encouragement.i.

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felixthecat

Sometimes with your prose you outdo yourself. In this poem, with its pathos and reminiscence and exceptional structure, you did exactly that.
i must say that in your collection :) Kiss, Kiss, Goodbye might very well be the headline work. Loved it...and voted, of course.

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angamonkey

:D This was a great read. You portrayed the emotions flawlessly and beautifully. And I love the cover, it just made it so much better. You have my vote.
-Angely

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UniquePoet60

Sereni,

This is a very beautiful and touching poem.

The things we go through in love.

Excellent writing!

You have my vote.

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