Innocence Lost

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User: sereni
Innocence Lost
Three intertwined stories of a young girl trying so hard to be a grown up and coming to the realization that she doesn't really know her boyfriend.

Stichwörter: 
love, run away, abandon
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Gelöschter User vor ca. 12 Jahren bearbeitet

Wow, what a sad, but too often true story. You told it well. Makes me shudder to think of some of those 'lost' teens. (I was one once, but I forget!)

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sereni vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

Revkenr That means a lot to me when you said my stories are believable.I try and write stories that show conflict but always have a glimmer of hope at the end. I appreciate your taking the time to read them. :)

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sereni vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

Thanks Tanya 77 I'm happy you liked my Drabbles.

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RevkenR vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

I like when a story is believable. This one is, and it also makes a good point.

Very well done, and good luck on the drabble

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Gelöschter User vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

Such a pity to want to grow up so quickly, that some end doing things without realizing what is really happening and what consequences they might have to face later. Nice stories, well done.

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sereni vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

I am happy to welcome a newcomer and I am so glad you read and saved my book.I hope this site is everything you are looking for, read on. :)

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sereni vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

Many thanks. I appreciate your reading my three short stories and I am so glad you like them. The teen years can be so difficult, and there is such a rush to grow up.

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sereni vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

angamonkey Thanks for your vote I am delighted you enjoyed it. There are so many lost children

I saw this first hand when my kids brought home their friends to our home and my heart broke for them. I only touched on a small part of a young girls life.

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idrinkechoes vor ca. 13 Jahren bearbeitet

This reminds me so much of what it's like to be a teenager and how eager teenagers are to trust that freedom will lead us to happiness.

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