BookRix

nice book

I just delete some chapter because I want to retype it and change the story line a bit. And I hope all of your support.

Love secret.z.

Thank for the advice,I'll try my best to correct all my mistakes that I have made. And thank for the love it mean a lot to me.

You have an interesting story there, but it contains a lot of mystakes.
You have words written wrong, some have plural forms instead of singular and in reverse.
And I advice you to pay attention to verbs. You used past tence instead of present and such.
Now I don't want to upset you, I am telling you these in order to correct yourself and improve.
Use google translate or any other sited to help you.
Good luck in the future.

Why do you write like that it's kinda confusing. But other than that it's a really good book.