This was a good read, enjoyed the love hate relationship. Would like to read more once you have finished writing. Let me know if you are going to continue or not, waiting for that intense sex scene you have a creative mind.
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I like it but I think you should change the age range. NO little 10 year old or anyone under sixteen should read this. I like it though I think you should write more.
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it was AWESOME but please update sooner and longer !!! pwease :'-(
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I agree with silvermoons last comment. I loved the last part you just wrote about him becoming an astronaut to get some space. I wanted to burst out laughing but it is midnight and if I wake up my sisters they will tell my mom I was up late and my mom will take away my laptop. Please update soon.
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Lol kk!xox
hurry i wanna see someone ass kicked
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Oh hell no! I know that chick did not just do that! It wouldn't be me. You need to update,, and soon!
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Yeah, dude, you should do more!
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amazing cant wait to read more
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thnx! xox
Update coming soon?
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I just updated yesterday soo... yeah, but I will be updating regularly!
lol okay I'll try!